Feedback I Received On My Paper

     During my peer review today I received both positive and negative comments. One of the positive comments I received was my paper was creative. A few things I need to work on is my thesis, I also have to work on transitioning my sentences and adding Planyc into my paper.Some steps I plan to take on revising my paper is, spending a little more time each day working on it and visiting the writing center in room B-200. One of my concerns for this assignment is I might not have time to go to the writing center so  my paper wont get revised before I turn it in.